The comic was good, but left me wanting. Then, I read the bonus panel. It wouldn’t normally be said, but somehow, it completed the panel. And made me laugh.
Your conpleted version is better than the original, I can glad you decided to go with it, instead.
Good job!
Bonus panel – his tears are chocolate, and turns the milk puddle into chocolate milk.
Not a bad idea …
Once you go black…
Don’t laugh over spilled milk.
Huh. Turns out “spilt” isn’t really a word.
The comic was good, but left me wanting. Then, I read the bonus panel. It wouldn’t normally be said, but somehow, it completed the panel. And made me laugh.
Your conpleted version is better than the original, I can glad you decided to go with it, instead.
Good job!