Spider

Into the cabinet she went for a snack, she did not know it was haunted the rack. She opened the door and screamed out in fear, at a massive spider big as a deer. Her boyfriend came running at the sound of her yell, 'what is it my dear, quickly do tell!' She whimpered and pointed to the cabinet door, 'In there,' she managed, 'a beast of lore.' So he went to the cabinet and opened it up, but all he could find were products and cups. Then he spotted what she'd dreaded the most--a tiny spider on its thread eating toast. And that's the lesson of girl and spider: the former sees latter a great bit wider.



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One thought on “Spider

  1. I like the older version. I love the final product.
    For some people, it is scarier having the spider on them. But, for me having a spider overflow the cabinet doors gives a better jump scare feeling. Plus, the facial expression on the man in the final product is clearer, bring a bigger smile to my face.
    Finally, less is more. This makes the final product better in content.
    I like that she wimpers, instead of saying the object of her fears in the final. His realization of what he is searching for makes his reaction all the better.
    Excellent comic!

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